John, You kept it so simple. I really like that. Normally when I think of obsession, I think of such grandiose ideas. But the words you used captured the idea very well. Good job. -Becca
I like the contrast between "looms and camoflauge" and "plain sight. It's almost childlike, in the sense that it is trying to hide but the evidence is everywhere. Nice haiku.
You described obsession in such few words but perfectly. Great job!
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John,
ReplyDeleteYou kept it so simple. I really like that. Normally when I think of obsession, I think of such grandiose ideas. But the words you used captured the idea very well. Good job.
-Becca
I like the contrast between "looms and camoflauge" and "plain sight. It's almost childlike, in the sense that it is trying to hide but the evidence is everywhere. Nice haiku.
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